Showing posts with label CPI Stories. Show all posts
Showing posts with label CPI Stories. Show all posts

Thursday, July 12, 2012

The Game ( Parts 1 - 3 )

Hi everyone! Also I am really sorry about the extreme delay of this story part, ( part 3) it was like 7 months! Yeah, a very long time... So, I decided to, in order to make you remember, I have posted the first 2 parts and the new one just below. And if you haven't, please read my other 4 CPI Stories by clicking here. Please enjoy!


Story for people of 12+ ages

[ PART 1 ]

London, U.K. October of 1993. 

Mr. Hudson was always a very nice person. He was really creative, and everyone liked him. He worked in the Computer Technology Apartment at London, in the United Kingdom. His vocation was the Computer Archives Management, in which he created, fixed and modified Special computer archives. He was always proud of his work, and he loved to work on it... but one day, something happened. Mr. Hudson wasn't the same person everyone knew.

- Mr. Hudson, - said Mr. Phil - I think it's time for you to go to your house, don't you think? You've been working all day! -
- I can't... I can't stop working... - said Mr. Hudson

Days passed by, each one with the same weirdness of Mr. Hudson. He never wanted to stop working: his teammates had to put some sleeping pills in his tea to make him rest. Each time someone suggested him to take a breath, he always answered the same thing to everyone:

"I can't stop working"

Everyone started to worry about Mr. Hudson, but they couldn't make anything to help him to come back to normal. Also, no one knew in what he was working so much. Just one day, one of his friends, Mara, sneaked into his office to discover what Mr. Hudson was making, while he wasn't there. She didn't found anything out of the normal, just one New Archive named "The Game" in Mr. Hudson's computer. Days after, she finally decided to ask him about the archive. Mr. Hudson, surprised, said to her, shaking:

- It's something no one has used before... something that will cross virtual reality with real one. I have to hide it... if it ends in wrong hands, everyone will pay that mistake! - he said, really nervous
- Mr. Hudson, trust me. You can tell me everything that worries you - said Mara, scared
In that moment, Mr. Hudson start looking everywhere, really scared and nervous.
- They heard me.. they know that I told you! I have to escape... I have to escape!!! - he screamed of horror, as the same time he ran into his car.

That was the last day ever someone saw him.

[ PART 2 ]

19 Years later, London, U.K.

Jerry Rogers was another student at Fiderside Jr. High School, at London. He was very smart, creative, and he was also very good at jokes. He really liked to mess up their friend's things, throw paper balls at class, and he always liked the way their friends played with him. His best friend was Peter Palks, another guy of his classroom, which knew Jerry since kindergarden. Though Peter wasn't as smart as the rest of his class, he always tried to get the best scores at his exams. He was playful, funny, and everyone liked him. But what both had was their love to videogames.

- Good morning, class -
- Good morning, Ms. Erika -

Ms. Erika was the typical strict teacher at school. She was quite fat, had brown hair, and her voice was a little rough. She was Jerry and Peter's History teacher, everyone's worst subject.

- Today, - Ms. Erika said -  We are going to talk about a very interesting topic... -
- Hey Peter - said Jerry, in a low voice
- What? - answered Peter
- Have you heard about the School Trip we are going to have next week? -
- No! ( said Peter, surprised ) Where are we going to?... -

But to everyone's surprise, Ms. Erika said, with an angry face:

- Peter Palks, shut up and please tell me what I just said -

Everyone turned their heads to Peter.

- Uuuuum... - he said, nervous
- Uuuum what? - said Ms. Erika
- I don't know -
- Really? I thought you did because you where talking so much! -

After that, Jerry decided to remain in silence until the class was over, as same as Peter. But Peter was still distracted in other things. When the class was over, Mr. Steven ( or Mr. Eleeven, as everyone called him ) came to the classroom. Mr. Steven was the school's principal.

- Good morning, students -
- Good morning, Mr. Steven -
- Well, I just came here to make an announcement. Someones may have heard about the School Trip we are going to have next week... but just to inform everyone, the place we are going to is the "Computer Technology Museum". There we will find out more about... -
- Hey Peter - said Jerry
- What? - answered Peter, again
- I have heard about that museum before. Did you knew that real people worked in their own computer systems there in the 90´s? -
- No... and, for me that Museum sounds boring... All of them do, indeed. I thought we where going to a Theme Park - said Peter, disappointed
- ... so remember to bring everything you will need for the Trip. Any questions? -  finished saying Mr. Steven
- Yes - said Mario, the class´ worst student - where can I go to buy some chocolate cookies? - he said, joking.
Everyone started to laugh.
- You shall have more respect, Mario, or you will not go to the trip! -
Hours passed by, school finished, the cleaners made their job and everyone went home.
Everyone except 1 person.

[ PART 3 ]

It was Mr. Steven, walking through the Hallways of the building. He was passing by the classrooms, checking each one of the corners, looking through all the windows, opening all the doors... but he didn't even turned on the lights. By some reason, Mr. Steven always liked to take some night trips in the school, always with the lights off, using a Lantern as guide. So there he was, walking in the darkness.
Schools are really interesting places. There are so many ways to describe them... Although they're one of the most common things in the world, they can be a place full of mysteries. But Fiderside Jr. High School was no exception.

And Mr. Steven knew that.

So there he was, walking.
All alone.

Meanwhile, in Jerry's House:

- Peter, have you finished your homework yet? It's too late! - he said to Peter, via a video call.
- Oh come on, you know I never do homework - Peter answered, lazy.
- Haha, so that's why you fail so many exams! You should start studying. We have the School Trip next week, remember? They won't let you go if you don't improve your scores -
- Aaghhh... ok, I will study. But nowadays, I don't want to go to the museum. It sounds too boring, don't you think? -
- If you didn't knew, there is going to be an exam for it. And it will count 40% of our score! -
- What?!? Mr. Steven didn't said anything about that! How do you know? - Peter asked, surprised.
- Long story... well, I'm going to sleep. See you tomorrow! -  Jerry said, tired.
- Goodbye -

They both knew that that School Trip was going to be different from the other ones.
And they where very right.

Story made and created by Je45rry ( alias ) All rights reserved.

Sunday, January 8, 2012

The Game ( Part 2 )

Note: Before you start reading this, I would like to apologize about the BIG delay of this story part. Here is the link if you haven't read the first part of this story ( which is made by me ) Click here Thanks!

19 Years later, London, U.K.

Jerry Rogers was another student at Fiderside Jr. High School, at London. He was very smart, creative, and he was also very good at jokes. He really liked to mess up their friend's things, throw paper balls at class, and he always liked the way their friends played with him. His best friend was Peter Palks, another guy of his classroom, which knew Jerry since kindergarden. Though Peter wasn't as smart as the rest of his class, he always tried to get the best scores at his exams. He was playful, funny, and everyone liked him. But what both had was their love to videogames.

- Good morning, class -
- Good morning, Ms. Erika -

Ms. Erika was the typical strict teacher at school. She was quite fat, had brown hair, and her voice was a little rough. She was Jerry and Peter's History teacher, everyone's worst subject.

- Today, - Ms. Erika said -  We are going to talk about a very interesting topic... -
- Hey Peter - said Jerry, in a low voice
- What? - answered Peter
- Have you heard about the School Trip we are going to have next week? -
- No! ( said Peter, surprised ) Where are we going to?... -

But to everyone's surprise, Ms. Erika said, with an angry face:

- Peter Palks, shut up and please tell me what I just said -

Everyone turned their heads to Peter.

- Uuuuum... - he said, nervous
- Uuuum what? - said Ms. Erika
- I don't know -
- Really? I thought you did because you where talking so much! -

After that, Jerry decided to remain in silence until the class was over, as same as Peter. But Peter was still distracted in other things. When the class was over, Mr. Steven ( or Mr. Eleeven, as everyone called him ) came to the classroom. Mr. Steven was the school's principal.

- Good morning, students -
- Good morning, Mr. Steven -
- Well, I just came here to make an announcement. Someones may have heard about the School Trip we are going to have next week... but just to remind everyone, the place we are going to is the "Computer Technology Museum". There we will find out more about... -
- Hey Peter - said Jerry
- What? - answered Peter, again
- I have heard about that museum before. Did you knew that real people worked in their own computer systems there in the 90´s? -
- No... and, for me that Museum sounds boring... All of them do, indeed. I thought we where going to a Theme Park - said Peter, disappointed
- ... so remember to bring everything you will need for the Trip. Any questions? -  finished saying Mr. Steven
- Yes - said Mario, the class´ worst student - where can I go to buy some chocolate cookies? - he said, joking.
Everyone started to laugh.
- You shall have more respect, Mario, or you will not go to the trip! -
Hours passed by, school finished, the cleaners made their job and everyone went home.
Everyone except 1 person.

Created by Je45rry. Part 2 coming soon!

Tuesday, November 8, 2011

Next CPI Story: "The Game"


Hi everyone! As you may know, like 1 year ago I began writing Stories and then posting them in this blog, each one separated by parts. I decided to call them "CPI Stories", as you may know. Each one of them are y me, I mean, I am the creator of all those CPI Stories. One thing you should know, is that every single CPI Story is 100% made by me. Often, I post story - parts between days, but now that "Someone Else" is over, there's no CPI Story in process right now. So, I decided to announce my next CPI Story. I have many ideas, but only one of them will turn into a CPI Story. After big thinking, I finally chose one. It's name is "The Game" ( interesting name, right? ) This CPI Story is quite similar to the other ones, but this one includes more science fiction, suspense, terror and everything else; and I'm sure, that by some way, you will get related to it. Right at the end of this post is the story's description. I hope you will really like it, I will try to turn it my best CPI Story ever yet. And remember again: I'm the writer. Hopefully, I will post the first part of this new CPI Story this Saturday. You are free to send your opinions through a comment, I will be always glad to answer questions for you! Oh, and please remember to vote in the special poll that's located at the sidebar. Thanks for reading, and see you later!

The Game
To Ages 11+

Peter and Jerry are normal high - schoolers, that live the typical daily life of a person of its age. One day, in a School Trip to London, they discover a really old computer, that contains a really weird archive named "The Game". Bored of they rutinary lives, they decide to play it, whatever it is. What happens next is a completely horrifying experience that crosses Virtual Reality to Real one, destroying every single scientific theory, risking everyone's life, and turning possible what no one thought could ever happen. Now, they shall finish and win it, or lose and end what may be the world as everyone knows it, forever. 

Wednesday, April 13, 2011

CPI Stories: Information you would like to know!


Hello, everybody! I'm sure that you have noticed that I have been posting stories here, in Club Penguin Info. All these stories are created by me, and they are protected ( all rights reserved ) Just to remember you that you can't copy from this blog without my authorization and without giving be credit about my stories. If I discover that someone is copying my stories without giving me credit about that, I will have to disable right - click in the blog and maybe I would never post a story again. I still have many ideas for new upcoming stories, so don't make me cancel all that, please. In other things, I also made this post to tell you how did all these stories came to my mind. Well, here they are:
  • Numbers
It was a normal day, and I was thinking about what new could I make with the blog. In that moment, the idea of creating stories and posting them here came to my mind. I always liked to show my stories to the world, so I began writing Numbers. I started to think "¿of what think can I do my story?" and "¿will they like my stories?" In that moment, I saw my clock, and after that I began doing homework. My geography's teacher wanted us to find coordenates of places as homework. Then, I got the idea of two boys that find secret numbers and strange people in their city. If you read the end of my story, you would never think that that could happen, right? Well, that's how I made Numbers. But after that, I wanted to make more stories... :D If you could notice, this story doesn't mentions in what place it starts, it only mentions Madrid, Spain.
  • Photos
One day I was thinking what other story could I make for the blog, but I didn't have an idea. I went to sleep, thinking about it. Then, it happened. I had a strange dream ( or maybe nightmare ), where I was in my own house. It was really dark, there where no lights. I was in the second floor, but then I heard a strange noise coming downstairs. I, feared, began to walk down the stairs, carefully. When I arrived to the first floor of my house I didn't saw anything out of the normal. But then, I heard that a glass crashed. I soon noticed that the glass that crashed was a glass box than I had there. But when I walked to see it, I was really surprised. It didn't seemed to have crash lines, instead it had some birght things at the center. But then, the worst thing happened. I saw that there was a mirror in a wall. I don't know why, but I just walked there to see it. But then, I saw something horrible. A man, with old clothes like of the last century, was in the mirror. Then, he taked out his also - old camera. He extended his arms up, and he pressed the button. The light was released from the camera. Then, he smiled at me! Some seconds later, I waked up. Since that moment the idea of making Photos came to my mind. The story takes place in Indianapolis, Washington DC and New Jersey.
  • 4522912
    It is my most recent story. Some time ago, some persons said that if you called a number in the telephone, you would hear something really strange. I was really confused, but I never tried to call. I was thinking about that in my car hearing music, and then the idea came to my mind: a Telephone number that calls ( you know who ) would be a very good idea for a story! Since that I started writing the story, adding new things, just like the Telephone Number, the city, etc. I began thinking in all the electronic things that I could mention in the story, and then I choosed: Printer, TV, Telephone, Radio, Car, Elevator; and tried to turn them into mysterious machines. I recently finished writing the story :) It takes place in Seattle, just like the "Twilight" movie #3.

    So, what's coming next? I have many ideas for new stories... so I will choose the one that I most like and I will soon begin posting the story parts here in the blog :D Where it will take place? I am thinking that this time it will not be in USA.... What do you think? Also, I would like to thanks you for reading my stories. Thanks for all your good comments! Keep like that and I wil be making new and more cool stories :D Thanks for reading my post and don't forget that if you want to read my stories again just go to the "CPI Library" page in my blog and start reading! 4522912 will be added soon :) Thanks again!

    Monday, December 27, 2010

    CPI Stories, you decide!

    Hello! As you may know, I have been writing stories and publishing them here, in the blog. Already I have two stories completed, "Numbers" and "Photos". Now, I have some ideas of other stories I could make. But, I don't know what story post first. So, I need your help! I will post 2 ideas of stories, I will make a description of each one and you will vote for what story you want to read first!

                                                              4522912
    Mysterious murders have been happening in all the city, and the police can't find the responsible. When two boys hear the rumor that exists a phone number that calls Devil, one of them calls, believing it's just a joke. But they soon know who is the responsible of all the murders... Now, they have to make the most important surviving race of their lives, before Devil returns the call.

                                                           We are the Future
     In times of 1810, Mexico's Independence's times, two boys find a portal to actual world. They soon know that this world was much better that their old, violent and difficult times. But when strange things began to happen in all the World, they soon discover that their absences in their old world is completely changing the one that we know today.

    Now, vote for the story you want to read first!



    In January 1 the first part of the story winner will be posted! Thanks and see you later!